Vickie Hurtt - Thayer Poet Ballad

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Frayed

worn... 
    away...
   tattered...
          along...
               the ...
              edges ...

      she was frayed...
              like termites...
                        holding...
                                   up...
                                bridges.

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Old Buck August 29, 2018 at 6:06 PM Vickie: I mowed two lawns today. I'll be like that in the morning. :o) I wonder is she was nearing 77? oldbuck

Lyric Man July 27, 2018 at 11:52 AM Yikes.. I sense a soon come apart!! Vickie Hurtt - Thayer September 10, 2018 at 6:00 PM Ha,ha,ha...Yep

Sand Blown July 26, 2018 at 12:59 PM wooo...what's that japanese paper art....origami!.... did some smooth writing there about depression and 'form' Vickie Hurtt - Thayer September 10, 2018 at 5:59 PM Thanks, Sand.

Line Gauthier July 26, 2018 at 10:53 AM Love the visual and the imagery, Vickie. Well done. Vickie Hurtt - Thayer July 26, 2018 at 11:11 AM Thank You, Line!