Frayed

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worn... away... tattered... along... the ... edges ... she was frayed... like termites... holding... up... bridges.

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Date: 8/29/2018 6:06:00 PM

Vickie: I mowed two lawns today. I'll be like that in the morning. :o) I wonder is she was nearing 77? oldbuck

Date: 7/27/2018 11:52:00 AM

Yikes.. I sense a soon come apart!!

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 9/10/2018 6:00:00 PM

Ha,ha,ha...Yep

Date: 7/26/2018 12:59:00 PM

wooo...what's that japanese paper art....origami!.... did some smooth writing there about depression and 'form'

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 9/10/2018 5:59:00 PM

Thanks, Sand.

Date: 7/26/2018 10:53:00 AM

Love the visual and the imagery, Vickie. Well done.

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 7/26/2018 11:11:00 AM

Thank You, Line!