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Inspired by the poem titles of James Andrew Fraser.. Hence, this mosaic.. some of the poems he wrote and one which we both collaborated.. :) 

Fraser's Mosaic

FRASER'S MOSAIC


Sometimes in life, I tripped. I slipped
  on Calvary hill where darkness ends.
Defrocked by the dark, I woke up in a dream, 
  a fresh start, my beloved I have!

 If I work to work a miracle, sinless eyes,
  I, a Scottish Golden Eagle, plank to present,
my white wings outstretched 
   through hemispheric skies. 
Above the golden sands of love, blessed I am!

Tomorrow's blank page: tension in sight
  like veins of life, just a rose engulfed in awe,
I view amidst the wilderness of blue 
  a morning sun over the Ben embracing my heart.

To spread one's wings and fly,
  I am for what I am:
     evergreen tears; height hopes, 
the freedom feeling in the light of moon,
  I dreamt, I seen...

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Note: all the lines, are few of James Fraser poem titles


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11:33 pm, December 20, 2014
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A   Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 11:15 PM
Hi Olive, ... Hope you are well...LINDA
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 1:29 AM
Thank you so much Linda.. :D!
Ward Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 12:28 PM
Unusual and delightful. :) Julia
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 3:08 AM
thanks much JUlia.. :)!
Callus Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 1:31 PM
Very beautiful and inspired mosaic, Olive_eloi! A clever way creating such lovely lines out of titles. Well done. Hugs // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 10:07 PM
thanks much Paul.. :)I like it that you like it. Happy Holidays!!!:)
Andresen Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 6:13 AM
- A beautiful poem, Olive ..... spread your wings .... fly free - A small smile to you my friend :) - I wish you and your family a beautiful Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 7:31 AM
weeeeeeeeeeeeee.. thanks much Anne Lise.. :)! I wish you too a Happy Christmas.. :)! xoxo.. :)!
Fraser Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 2:10 PM
Am I smiling, you bet! My poetry titles made into a gem of a poem, also one of our co-writes. Terrific job of creating such a wonderful poem Olive. I'm going to treat this like a Christmas Present, and cherish it in my favourites. Thank you so much, James xx :) xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 7:30 AM
no probs James.. :)! it's just my simple gesture of giving you back the smiles i received each time we do a write.. :)! Be happy always and stay blessed.. :)!
Meade Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 1:09 PM
I think I see . . . released from the guilt of our sin, we can fly, soar like eagles . . . the great I Am providing the love fuel that sends a soul ... to do love acrobatics in the sky. Outstanding write.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 7:28 AM
thanks much David,. :) your comments are so generous that it encourages me to write more.. :)!
A   Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 10:44 AM
Hello Olive, such a pretty poem. Sometimes, I forget the wonderful feeling of other poems. The Highlander will love this... Love Lolly Linda... :) Hope you are enjoying the holidays.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 12:13 AM
weee Lolly Linda. miss you hugs . :) Hope you are doing great.. Happy Holidays.. :)
Allison Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 9:13 AM
Oh Olive this is so beautiful James will LOVE it:-) Hugs jan xxx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 12:12 AM
thanks Jan... :) while reading his lists i was in wow of how creative he chooses hid title.. hence, this one.. :)
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