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Poem written in response to online poetry class: "Write a Kimo poem about a mountain range."

 

FRANKLIN MOUTAINS-El Paso, Texas

Franklins rise like brittle bones of the earth, holding the heat in stillness, while the desert sand drifts.
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Gauthier Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 6:31 AM
lovely comparison and imagery ~
Rolland Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 6:18 AM
beautiful, now i know a little piece of Texas, it seems really beautiful and emotional, thanks poet sara
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