Ann Gilmour Poet Rhyme

Frankie's Day

   
Born in 1944 the 17th of March
The day ‘tis called St Patrick's Day
To me it’s Frankie's day
My darling man I send to you
my love with birthday wishes
Frankie I still miss you so
devastated you had to go
For now I live here all alone
so lonely here inside our home
Loneliest time the evenings
I turn to talk there's no one here
Reaching out to stroke your head
there's just a pillow here instead
Now that I have Parkinson's 
oh it feels ten times worse
Darling  Frank ~ did you know
Did dearest Neil tell you so
So suddenly he left that day
broke all our hearts when called away
Please send a sign telling me
you're both together now
With Mum and Dad and those you love
your birthday now in heaven above
So darling sending all my love
Please send me strength
Please send me love
Until my time please wait for me
at heaven’s gate  
~~~~~
please don’t be late…

Written on Frank’s 78th birthday 2022

Contest A BRIAN STRAND 1091 
Sponsor Brian Strand
 FIRST PLACE

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Gordon Mcconnell April 2, 2022 at 1:36 PM Lovely penning Ann, such lovely devotion to Frank with nice imagery and expression. Hope all is well with you, Blessings, Gordon Ann Gilmour April 2, 2022 at 3:48 PM I thank you so much Gordon for your kind words of encouragement dear friend. I am ok, though my Parkinson's is moving on now, which depresses me at times... hoping you are well, with love and hugs Ann xx

Sara Kendrick March 31, 2022 at 12:44 PM Creative way to go for Brian's contest. Congrats on your work being on his winners' list. Sara Ann Gilmour April 2, 2022 at 3:49 PM Thank you so much Sara for your congrats. I appreciate your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tom Cunningham March 29, 2022 at 1:13 PM A beautiful tribute to Frank, I'm sure he'll be at the gates of heaven to welcome you. Hope you're keeping well Ann. Tom PS, congratulations on your win. Ann Gilmour April 2, 2022 at 3:52 PM Bless you Tom and thank you for your lovely words of encouragement. Been very down lately and have not written much or even been on PS, so must try to make up for lost time. With kindest thoughts Tom from Ann xx

Shirley Hawkins March 19, 2022 at 2:19 AM How could your husband not hear or feel the love and devotion you expressed so beautifully in this rhyme. I am so sorry that you are suffering from Parkinson's, Ann. I hope today has been a pleasant one for you. Do you have any support? I sincerely hope so. Take care, Shirley. Ann Gilmour April 2, 2022 at 3:55 PM Oh dearest Shirley how kind your words are. Thank you so much for your visit, I really appreciate it.. No I do not have any actual support at present, although my grandson has just moved closer to me and is very kind and supportive ~ I am so lucky to have him... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Christuraj Alex March 18, 2022 at 9:12 PM Great Day. Beautiful environs. Congratulations! Ann Gilmour April 2, 2022 at 3:57 PM Bless you dear Christuraj for you lovely visit and congratulations... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Joseph P. DiMino March 17, 2022 at 6:25 PM I would like to think that Frank hears you, and that he and Neil are together, loving you, having a lot of kisses and hugs stored up, awaiting a joyful reunion. Blessings! Ila and Joe. Ann Gilmour April 2, 2022 at 3:58 PM Ohhh dear Joe such a wonderful thought, thank you so much my friend. With kindest thoughts to you both from Ann xx

Elena Eagle March 17, 2022 at 10:19 AM Ann - this is so sweet and a moving tribute to Frank. Thank you for sharing with us through this poem. Ann Gilmour March 17, 2022 at 1:08 PM Dear Elena, thank you so much for your kind words, and how lovely to hear from you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Panagiota Romios March 17, 2022 at 9:22 AM Dearest Ann, How poets can read this and not comment, is beyond my poet’s soul. Are they fearful of emotion? The pain you feel, I feel across the pond, for heaven’s sake. Frankie and Neil, do await you with greatest love. Being a widow, also, I miss my husband., as well. This is an outstanding FAv for me. And should be a POTD. But even, if not It stands in the hall of my heart as one of the best poems ever. You are a warm and Loving you! Hugs from across the pond, Panagiota xoxo Panagiota Romios March 19, 2022 at 12:18 PM Ann, Glad you got out that night! Good show! And raised a glass to Frank. Awesome, Pangie! Ann Gilmour March 17, 2022 at 1:05 PM Bless you dearest friend and thanks for your lovely comments, it means a lot to me. My friend and I went out for a nice meal and a glass of red wine to raise a glass to Frank. It was a beautiful evening with a full moon shining down upon the the sea. Thank you dear Panagiota xxx