Frankie

Gentle, sweet and sagging smile, No finer music than her snoring - My loving English bulldog Frankie. Just hate to exercise all alone, Got Frankie to share my walks - She does, to the end of the driveway. Written August 25, 2012 For Michael J. Falotico’s contest “What makes you smile, What makes you frown” Two Senryus

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/26/2012 12:27:00 PM

Ahhh, this is so sweet, Lee! I love English bulldogs. They are adorable...love and blessings, Rhonda

Lee Ramage
Date: 8/28/2012 7:13:00 AM

Thanks Rhonda, she is now the love of my life.

Jack Horne

Date: 8/26/2012 12:25:00 PM

lol, our dog Nero was like Frankie : ) Many congrats on your wins, Lee

Len Gasun

Date: 8/26/2012 11:57:00 AM

ha ha ha. i love it!!! excellent senryu you penned for the contest, Lee. I'm sure this will win. Good luck always!!! Thanks for dropping by. hugs, leonora

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2012 10:56:00 AM

excellent way to do that contest. I love these doggie senryu.

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/25/2012 9:13:00 PM

Nice two verse poem describing your dog. You have too many syllables per line for this work to be considered a senryu. It appears to be better suited in the category of free verse.