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Frangible

The feeling of fragility is precious, But it demands emotional mortality. A longing for something so distant, Emotions unfounded and absent. Hold me and I may break. Kiss me and I may die.

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Date: 4/5/2025 2:44:00 AM

Not sure why I’m glued to this free verse of yours…You’ve managed to captivate me with these 6 powerful lines of emotions. A scarred heart at one point of my life made me feel this way. So I can relate.

Devin Croteau
Date: 4/5/2025 4:06:00 AM

Thank you, i appreciate that this poem resonates with you too. The last 2 lines of this piece especially ring echos onto my ears. It's been 4 months since i wrote it and yet almost no day has gone by that I don't recite them.