Jack Jordan Poet Free verse

Fragrant Garden

The fragrant garden’s
	jasmine suggestions, 
	gardenia’s pungent complement.
	Listening silently to music
	of insects in the grass,
	sometimes more rapid, sometimes slower.
	Silently listening to the music

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Debbie Duncan March 31, 2013 at 4:38 PM this is a very nice poem, green grass and flowers in the back or front yard ;} Happy blessed Easter . Jack Jordan March 31, 2013 at 4:44 PM Thank you, Debbie, and the same for you. Thanks for reading and commenting. Jack

Jack Jordan March 31, 2013 at 9:43 AM I noticed that myself. I've been reading a lot of haiku and haiku theory lately that seems to have rubbed off, however unconsciously. Thanks for the reading. Jack

Andrea Dietrich March 31, 2013 at 8:30 AM gosh, this one almost could be a tanka as well, Jack. I enjoyed your fragrant garden.

Poet Destroyer A March 30, 2013 at 5:37 PM Your poem is beautiful, and smells lovely Mr Jordan... have yourself a nice and happy Easter..pd Jack Jordan March 30, 2013 at 6:05 PM Back at'cha, pd... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2013 at 9:09 AM - Sounded lovely, Jack. - I will come ..... - xoxo / / Anne-Lise :) Jack Jordan March 30, 2013 at 9:55 AM I'll look for you. Jack