Fragments
and then he said ''How's the cat?''
I looked back at him, said ''Fine''
and then I said ''Here's your post''
and he said ''Is all that mine?''
and then I said ''It looks like rain''
and then he said ''You're looking well''
and then he said ''I’d better go''
and I thought ''Go to hell''
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