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Fragmented Treasures and Tears

"FRAGMENTS AND CRUMBS OF LIFE, ALL THE LITTLE PIECES" - John Ruskin, 1853 Sunlight gleams in fragmented rays Phantoms flash in tormented ways Memories drown my downcast mind Fantasies make my eyes go blind I cling to those little pieces Hold on dear as heartbeat ceases You and I walking down the road Lost in each other's wrangling mode Talking of love ever after Mixed with our euphoric laughter Who knew you would be gone so soon? Leaving me lone under the moon Tearful I look back in sorrow Mourning for illusive morrow All our love that ever matters All our dreams and never afters Thinking of you, walk to your grave Fighting tears, I try to be brave Hanging onto lingering crumbs Reminders of love as it comes Intimate moments that we shared Discussions had, heart to heart bared All these and more come to my mind Cherished treasures you left behind 08.25.2020 For Constance La France's "All the little Pieces"

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Date: 9/10/2020 2:36:00 AM
Jo, congratulations on your win in my challenge All The Little Pieces with this excellent write _Constance
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Date: 9/4/2020 5:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/poem. I love your line, "Cherished treasures you left behind." That said so much. Enjoy your win and day.............
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Date: 9/4/2020 4:22:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Jo :) - Wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/3/2020 10:21:00 PM
This is a poetic tearjerker, Jo. Top shelf writing of deeply felt loss. I loved your line "All our dreams and never afters". Congrats and blessings, my friend. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 8/25/2020 8:52:00 AM
What a truly poignant piece this is. With really great emotion and imagery. Great write. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/25/2020 6:37:00 AM
- What a wonderful poem, Jo :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/25/2020 3:44:00 AM
A superb write, Jo--emotions flow in every line--a TOP winner for me.
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