Fragmented Poetics

I think sometimes, 
in an effort to sell reflections 
of life,
egotistic mirrors 
break themselves 
into a million pieces.


Fractured verses,
bent and poisoned,
deformed from the ill-treatment 
of delicate lines;
echoes of poetry.



©All rights reserved. Author Marcela Villar M. 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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October 13, 2015 at 2:11 PM
Well...It is now! :) John
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October 13, 2015 at 2:10 PM
This is very good, Marcela! I do not read much "Free-verse", never mind award high marks - but this is excellent writing! My best regards! :) john P.s A Seven +!
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October 13, 2015 at 5:38 PM
My gratitude, John. I truly appreciate your comments. Thank you, Marcela
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