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Lush sultry scents fill my nostrils
spices and exotic flowers blooms
first encounter with dark people 
my, they were scarey like pirates

Armed with enormous panga's
and wickedly nasty looking knives
at almost 8 years old I shook violently
when one looked at me grinning gruesomely

I shrank back against my mother, my haven,
never had I seen such delightful sights
junk boats sailing round us, their crew
most motley, in a range of multi colors

Waving their enormous panga's at us
gold teeth gleaming, it was so scarey
I was glad to sail on to Dar-es-Salaam
many horrendous nightmares I then  suffered

Little knowing that Dar was just the same
some steps I now had taken into the unknown
so many fears still lay in the future and beyond
a totally new yet dangerous world lay ahead of me


I am describing an overnight stop at Zanzibar at my young age it was a fearful very exciting experience

written 09/04/2013

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A  Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 10:14 PM
lovely win. Love ~SKAT~
Hamilton Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 3:45 AM
hi and ty Skat have a great day Shadow x smile
A   Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 10:18 PM
another nice winning poem Shadow... take care...Linda
Hamilton Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 5:13 AM
hi Linda Ty always for your support and encouragement Shadow x smile
Puddifoot Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 5:43 AM
quite an unusual piece for the contest; I think you painted a vivid picture here of your memories; congrats on joint 4th with me! :)
Hamilton Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 9:58 AM
ty congrats to you also Shadow x smile
Tsiluma Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 11:27 PM
Beautiful memory Shadow - well described. Congrats on your win!
Hamilton Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 4:10 AM
hi and Ty Vicky for congrats and reading Shadow xsmiles
Lamoureux Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 4:23 PM
Congratulations, I am pleased to see this on the winners list so that others can appreciate this piece.
Hamilton Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 4:12 AM
so sweet and kind of you Richard Ty for your continued support and encouragement Shadow x smiles
Mcdaid Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 5:32 PM
A LOVELY PEACE OF WRITING LINDA MY DEAR FRIEND GRIN
Hamilton Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 5:51 PM
hi mate how's you? Ty Liam good to hear you enjoyed Shadow x smile
Lamoureux Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 5:20 PM
This is so cool, I was fully drawn into your tale. This is the sign of true artistry. Well done!
Hamilton Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 5:53 PM
wow Ty Richard dear so inspiring Shadow x smile
J.T. Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 4:37 PM
you tell this story well. I like it
Hamilton Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 4:55 PM
hi PJ Ty for visiting my work and for liking it Shadow x smile
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