Fragment

And maybe

I was just the sunset you ran to 

When he wasn't around
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dom Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 11:41 PM
wow. a kind of wry sadness there... I'm glad I stopped by to check out your writes.
Meyer Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 10:22 PM
What a perfect title to this..these "fragments" of thought, with so few words, can sometimes speak paragraphs! I love it! x Peace Ruby
Martin Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 10:30 PM
Thank you very much! You made my evening.
Bauer Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 1:19 PM
nice poem, but sad!
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 3:45 AM
Well said Jeremy - Like it - A well written poem. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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