Fragile Memory

"Let me down..."
"Let me down..."
Echoes through my head,
It's all that I remember
Of what someone
Once Said.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 8:41 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Simon. Love, Carol
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June 4, 2012 at 9:08 AM
Love this piece!!
Henderson Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 10:52 AM
Thank you very much.....
Kendrick Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 2:21 PM
Interesting work..Sara
Henderson Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 2:30 PM
Thank you.....it was originally supposed to be a much longer piece but when i got to the end i just decided to stop as it seemed complete
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June 3, 2012 at 12:08 PM
Welcome to P-Soup Simon, hope you will write, read and comments back alot of poem here on P-Soup. - You do it so well in this small poem. - Have fun with poetry. - Love and hallo from Norway and me Anne-Lise
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June 3, 2012 at 9:50 AM
Beautiful in fragility and vision... i knew this would make me cry, i am the keeper of someones memories...lovely lovely piece...
Henderson Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 9:59 AM
Thank you. I wrote this many years ago.....It's nice to know it can still have a good effect on people!!
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