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Fragile Memory

"Let me down..." "Let me down..." Echoes through my head, It's all that I remember Of what someone Once Said.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/19/2012 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Simon. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2012 9:08:00 AM
Love this piece!!
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Simon Henderson
Date: 6/4/2012 10:52:00 AM
Thank you very much.....
Date: 6/3/2012 2:21:00 PM
Interesting work..Sara
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Simon Henderson
Date: 6/3/2012 2:30:00 PM
Thank you.....it was originally supposed to be a much longer piece but when i got to the end i just decided to stop as it seemed complete
Date: 6/3/2012 12:08:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup Simon, hope you will write, read and comments back alot of poem here on P-Soup. - You do it so well in this small poem. - Have fun with poetry. - Love and hallo from Norway and me Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/3/2012 9:50:00 AM
Beautiful in fragility and vision... i knew this would make me cry, i am the keeper of someones memories...lovely lovely piece...
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Simon Henderson
Date: 6/3/2012 9:59:00 AM
Thank you. I wrote this many years ago.....It's nice to know it can still have a good effect on people!!

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