Fragile Love

shimmering surface
taut beams supporting body
spanning cavity
filled with insecurity
hollow bridge in current sways
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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November 1, 2012 at 10:03 AM
‡ Make Myself A Theme Song From My Childhood, 'Your Going To Make It After All.' LOL, The Mary Tyler Moore Show. Any Heart Brushed Canvas Is A Becomes A Beautiful Painting, Dear Sweet Stephen. I Love The Metaphor And Thank You For Your Very Beautiful Comment; Poetic As Lovely. Love, Rachel *
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October 30, 2012 at 2:27 PM
Stephen .... really lovely Tanka - - oxox always / / Anne-Lise :)
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October 30, 2012 at 1:43 PM
love this comparison of love to a fragile bridge!!
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