Fragile Hearts

Flickering like candles in the slightest breeze,
Raw with emotion, they are seen so easily worn on sleeves.
Asunder they may break, so
Gentle you must be! Gossamer
Is the flimsy sweater of protection that they wear.
Laugh or look too hard at them, and you are liable to
Embarrass or perhaps even to embitter them.

Heed my advice:
Exercise restraint. Their souls 
Already are exposed and must be assuaged.
Refrain from ridiculing them, for
They already suffer from self-consciousness.
Sweeten your words instead. Strengthen and support fragile hearts.

Written Oct. 23, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/7/2016 2:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. The poem is deep with emotion and I can feel it. Also learnt a new word 'Gossamer' and you did a fine take on the topic. Thank you
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Date: 10/31/2016 8:41:00 PM
Very sweet Andrea, and congrats!!!! Hugs!
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Date: 10/27/2016 10:08:00 PM
"Flickering like candles in the slightest breeze" a lovely description of the tenderness of the fragile heart. congrats on your placement
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Date: 10/27/2016 7:07:00 AM
Nice Andrea, I wrote one but did it wrong and didn't have time to finish another one.
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Date: 10/25/2016 8:34:00 AM
Wonderful words of wisdom in your well-written Acrostic, Andrea. I really like where you took the 'fragile hearts' theme. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/25/2016 4:21:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your work, Andrea. Congrats for having it placed in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 10/24/2016 3:54:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 10/24/2016 1:07:00 PM
A message to live by, Andrea. Can you imagine a world where people were always mindful of the damage words can do to fragile, sensitive hearts. I'm going to favorite this one as a reminder that the way we treat others shows the type of people we are.
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Date: 10/24/2016 9:32:00 AM
Wise words... Great advise...Loved it...
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Date: 10/24/2016 4:49:00 AM
Well spoken Andrea, wisely insightful.
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Date: 10/23/2016 11:38:00 PM
Great poem Andrea, I really enjoyed this one./|\
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Date: 10/23/2016 8:26:00 PM
Good advice! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/23/2016 4:21:00 PM
Well said and great advice :) I endorse the sentiment in this poem. Loved it :)
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Date: 10/23/2016 3:56:00 PM
tender and very touching, andrea...
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Date: 10/23/2016 2:59:00 PM
Nicely done Andrea, enjoyed your poem. Regards, Craig
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Date: 10/23/2016 2:58:00 PM
Excellent advice Andrea....we need to handle them with care.
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Date: 10/23/2016 2:16:00 PM
Much truthful insight into your sweet heartfelt poem as some people are definitely more sensitive than others!:) Enjoyed your very insightful nice write Andrea!:)
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