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               "Fragile Heart"         

Fragile Heart

Frantically I turn the pages tearfully  with agony

Reluctant to close my eyes to virtual reality

Ageless love, to mend this fragile heart I plea

Giving up is not a choice, please be still

Inexpressible beating heart, I need your -

Love to be perfect once again in the waves of sea

Eternal rest of raining trees and darkness be



Hold me so I won’t fall apart .  It isn’t easy;  a wreath I emit

Every part of me that grieves,  you saw to depart

A fragile heart living behind as I breathe you in

Relentless my heart sinks deep in twisted pain endlessly

That part of  peace that last forever my heart is yours


10/18/2016

Sponsored by:  John Hamilton 
Contest Name : Fragile Hearts-Acrostic
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Nnoli Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 12:52 PM
This is highly emotional, deep, nice one Richard
Roper Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 12:52 PM
Thank you, Richard, for stopping by and reading my poem. Hugs Eve
Leachet Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 11:31 PM
So much emtion. I love it. Well done!!
Haight Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 8:21 AM
Heartfelt emotion and sad imagery in your 'fragile heart' poem, Eve. Well done, and congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Singh Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 6:31 AM
Congrats on this touching piece!
Green Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 3:46 PM
Such a sadly beautiful piece Eve. I thought I read and commented on this earlier, but I guess I was mistaken. So here I ma, the longing and the missing is deeply felt in your words today. I think this might be the winner in the contest.
Roper Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 6:44 PM
Thank you so much, Chris, a lot of these poems of course are about my hubby that I dearly love. I've almost lost him a few times so it is one of my biggest concerns to keep him alive... Hugs. Eve
Onclaud Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 8:45 AM
such an emotive write well scribed from your bleeding pen, eve... i am touched by your fragile heart!..huggs
Roper Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 6:44 PM
Thank you, Nette, you are looking wonderful... Hugs Eve
Wolf Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 11:35 PM
Wow! That's really good. Loved it /|\
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