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Fragile Flames

She was his muse 
so beautiful, a true
angel on earth
'til she revealed 
to him her many scars 
Disquiet at first filled
with concern
then slowly proceeded  
to unstitch every one
of her wounds
as if they were buttons
of an old  blouse...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/14/2014 7:01:00 AM
this is touching beautifully penned love how you drew this piece
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Date: 6/18/2014 6:14:00 AM
Loving the metaphors here Madelin..hugs Tim
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Madelin Barton
Date: 6/18/2014 8:55:00 PM
Thanks Tim putting the finishing touches on my first book and found some old stuff I considered worth sharing hence Fragile flames... Hugs Maddie

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry