Fragile Feelings

Your youthful presence puts my mind asunder.
Taboo things come carelessly from your mouth,
While we scream and shout. ---

Lousy lurker you must look elsewhere for your love.
Search sideways and under, 
Over open fields and
Through thick groves.

May Mother Mary have mercy,
Should she show to you many mortal loves
Once our argumentative aroma is done.

I inevitably loved you like a lamb loves it's flock.
But because our differences deepen our anguish at all times
Carefully convey your fragile feelings to another.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 2:17 PM
Interesting write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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