Fragile

Haiku fragile moments hover just out of harms brutish way as fireflies they shine.

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Russell Sivey

Date: 8/14/2017 5:18:00 AM

This is a special Haiku, I really love this one! There's something about fireflies that capture my heart, it's a childhood memory that I'll always cherish with my grandmother who has passed away! And this poem just reminded me of the times we spent capturing and releasing these wondrous creatures! What a beautiful piece you have written here! I loved reading it this morning, Great Work!! (By the way we call them lightning bugs here)

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/14/2017 7:22:00 AM

Lightening bugs. My eyes are playing trick on me sorry.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/14/2017 7:11:00 AM

Russell we do to, listening bugs I almost forgot that from my childhood. Thank you for such kind praise.

White Wolf

Date: 8/14/2017 3:58:00 AM

A beautiful haiku! Well done

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/14/2017 7:12:00 AM

Megwitch

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/14/2017 6:55:00 AM

I am happy you enjoyed reading it this morning.