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Fragile

Haiku

fragile moments hover
just out of harms brutish way
as fireflies they shine.

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Russell Sivey

August 14, 2017 at 5:18 AM

This is a special Haiku, I really love this one! There's something about fireflies that capture my heart, it's a childhood memory that I'll always cherish with my grandmother who has passed away! And this poem just reminded me of the times we spent capturing and releasing these wondrous creatures! What a beautiful piece you have written here! I loved reading it this morning, Great Work!! (By the way we call them lightning bugs here)

Patricia Cresswell

August 14, 2017 at 7:22 AM

Lightening bugs. My eyes are playing trick on me sorry.

Patricia Cresswell

August 14, 2017 at 7:11 AM

Russell we do to, listening bugs I almost forgot that from my childhood. Thank you for such kind praise.