Fractured Reality

Life rules the world,
Death stares at me.
Time roars,
World shatters on me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Morris Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 7:52 AM
Love this explosive poem. Stay blessed and enjoy writing. :-)
Talwar Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 5:02 AM
thank you
Jullion Avatar
May 23, 2023 at 11:38 AM
Beautiful. Thank you!
Talwar Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 7:23 AM
thanks i am still a newbie i will practice more to improve
Agustin Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 7:58 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Talwar Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 7:24 AM
thanks
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