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Fractured Reality

Life rules the world, Death stares at me. Time roars, World shatters on me.

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Michelle Morris

Date: 5/28/2023 7:52:00 AM

Love this explosive poem. Stay blessed and enjoy writing. :-)

Bhaumik Talwar
Date: 6/16/2023 5:02:00 AM

thank you

Sarah Ann Jullion

Date: 5/23/2023 11:38:00 AM

Beautiful. Thank you!

Bhaumik Talwar
Date: 5/27/2023 7:23:00 AM

thanks i am still a newbie i will practice more to improve

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/22/2023 7:58:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Bhaumik Talwar
Date: 5/27/2023 7:24:00 AM

thanks