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Fractured Mosaics

We are merely montages, a mélange of endless stardust - - Finessing poetry 'round melodic sentiments, nuances manifested 'neath fractured mosaics of entities' indwelling harmoniousness amidst surrendered yesteryear's spellbinding prospective endeavors, we are but astral whispers on winds of prismatic illusions upon transcendence midway fractals' furthermost macrocosms

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/2/2016 12:13:00 AM

This is one awesome poem Paloma! This really speaks my language and I love it! A fave for me! 7 ; )

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/1/2016 8:48:00 PM

Brilliant employment of language, Paloma. The poem speaks the truth concerning the nature of our being existentially. Aah, but we are also so much more, spiritually that is. Wonderful thought provocateur that you are, give us more of your amazing insights. Love from your kindred poetic spirit. RW

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/1/2016 11:40:00 AM

Yes, and the older we get the more fractures there are. I seldom think in entire sentences any more. I love your version, Paloma:)

Charlie Smith

Date: 11/1/2016 11:29:00 AM

I choose to think that original thought accounts for much more than an astral whisper. Thanks for provoking such inspiration Paloma, well done...

Chris Green

Date: 11/1/2016 9:27:00 AM

Often poetry will come out like that, fractured mosaics of thoughts and dreams, though an amazing poet like you can take the pieces and shards and fit them together until they are something beautiful, as is this poem above. Loved this one Paloma

Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 10:21:00 AM

You're too kind Chris, many thanks from my mosaic heart. :)