Fractured Families

Feeling disrespected, neglected Perhaps rejected... Not unexpected ~ Hearts disconnected

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Peter W Iversen

Date: 1/12/2020 10:23:00 AM

Ouch.Time to revise the will! A 9 word gem.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/12/2020 12:17:00 PM

Always a good idea to review that will and see if there any new 'won'ts!' Smiles, Gershon

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/7/2019 6:09:00 PM

oh, this is very good, gershon! i love the rhyme and you've said so much in such a few words...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/7/2019 8:14:00 PM

I've tried. Wish I weren't drawing from personal experience here, though... Oh, well. Thanks for the encouragement and support, Ilene. Appreciated. :) gw

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2019 5:25:00 PM

very good one!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/7/2019 8:13:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/7/2019 7:38:00 AM

Such a sad state of affairs...happens all the time. We must fight for connectedness! Of course, just saying this does not make it so. Cooperation is needed.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/7/2019 1:00:00 PM

That it happens all the time is such a sad commentary on the gracelessness of man. Only when we're united can we accomplish great things. And unity starts at home, as they don't---but should!---say. Thanks for the prescient comment, Kim. Best wishes, gw