Fp 1 That Day of Days

once 
   on Good Friday
they looked
       upon love,
at first 
          silence
a silence
        so black
        so dense,
then the sound..
a gentle
          wind-
after ..
  comes the dawn

Found poetry 8 inspired by Hedges prose of Clare Leighton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 10:20 PM
Superb in its meaningful beauty, Brian. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Strand Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 1:38 AM
Thanks Susan
Cunningham Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 3:59 AM
A stunning image Brian, those familiar with the bible will without doubt see it.
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July 15, 2018 at 7:36 AM
Thanks Tom
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