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Fp 1 That Day of Days

once 
   on Good Friday
they looked
       upon love,
at first 
          silence
a silence
        so black
        so dense,
then the sound..
a gentle
          wind-
after ..
  comes the dawn

Found poetry 8 inspired by Hedges prose of Clare Leighton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/15/2018 10:20:00 PM
Superb in its meaningful beauty, Brian. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Brian Strand
Date: 7/16/2018 1:38:00 AM
Thanks Susan
Date: 7/15/2018 3:59:00 AM
A stunning image Brian, those familiar with the bible will without doubt see it.
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Brian Strand
Date: 7/15/2018 7:36:00 AM
Thanks Tom

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