Fox

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A fox in the mist crossed my road driving uphill ~he was so lucky I could see his shiny eyes begging for another chance

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/26/2023 9:36:00 AM

Yes, one lucky fox. I hope he lives a good life in good health. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/27/2023 1:16:00 AM

Thanks a lot Sara. Blessingsxxx

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/25/2023 6:45:00 PM

Lovely Tanka, Maria. That fox was really lucky. Your imagery and wording are perfect as well.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/25/2023 6:56:00 PM

Hello Sotto. Thank you for your words. Yes, he was lucky, you know...? he was nearly touching the car, but in the end he ran the other side. Thank God. Good evening my friend. Thanks