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Fourty Six Years Ago

As the misty fog rises in the hollow In the cool still hours of early morn Thoughts of you rise in my heart Those memories of the loving kind Memories of a fall of years ago When times were very hard Observing you hobbling around the yard Both of us with love that was in full charge As I watch the pale colors on the horizon With a red sleepy sun rising through the trees Shilouetting them more plainly for all eyes to see The memory is more shilouetted hidden within dark Recesses of the mind Put away for safe keeping so that love can rise again The sun now has changed to dark gold I hope our love that was birthed Is now golden and filled with loving mirth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/29/2010 2:19:00 AM
this is beautiful and wonderful peace you have put in to words thank you duncan
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:11:00 PM
reminiscing the wonderful moments of our lives where love is a great part of it<3 i hope you are well, Sara. . ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 9/22/2010 7:26:00 AM
This is a very lovely write, and tender:) great job, Sara! Thanks for your comment on a recent post of mine... the brief but intense rain shower. Had to write that quick, before it stopped and so too the inspiration:)
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Date: 9/21/2010 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations, Sara, for not many can claim this bonding moment you celebrate. Bravo
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Date: 9/21/2010 2:34:00 AM
so profound, Sara, love it. Harry
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Date: 9/20/2010 9:08:00 PM
very lovely imagery my friend. A joy to read, well done!
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Date: 9/20/2010 3:51:00 PM
Very beautiful. Enjoyed this a lot today. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 9/20/2010 2:07:00 PM
Lovely lyrical lines Sara and such beauty too... a masterpiece of word flow and a breathtaking story ... ah romance ..makes the world go round.. or is that luv? no matter ..its all good like your poem today ..enjoyed...
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Date: 9/20/2010 1:14:00 PM
A WONDERFUL POEM SARA. THE THOUGHT SHOULD COME OUT EVERLASTING*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/20/2010 12:26:00 PM
i hope this happens to me. john
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Date: 9/20/2010 11:30:00 AM
Very sweet Sara. Keep those memories alive. And than you for your comments. Love, joyce
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Date: 9/20/2010 7:26:00 AM
sweet poem mom....keep sharing the good times or is it the hard times? I have to go to therapy at 11am
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Date: 9/20/2010 7:04:00 AM
Very creative and interesting on love and its feelings, Sara
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Date: 9/20/2010 6:01:00 AM
great combination of "words and thought" brought together to share with us. very enjoyable, thank you, chuck
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