Fourteen

Late one balmy June afternoon,

I perched on an outcropping of obsidian rock,

watching wide-eyed up the mountain

spewing molten lava into the sky. I was fourteen.

The base was fringed with a blanket of the green canopy,

 which abruptly ended halfway up,

where the the bare rock face stood out like a scar.

The towering volcano bore its wound proudly,

roaring its challenge, molten spittle flying from its mouth. I was fourteen.

What must it be like to have the power to create and destroy?

Closing my eyes, my feet left the outcropping of lava rock.

I joined the flow of lava,

reaching out and devouring the nearest organic material,

traveling farther, over the outcropping it had taken years to build,

hissing as I cooled, leaving my mark on the majestic landscape. I was fourteen.

My hands trembled as I raised my small blue camera,

trying to capture a snapshot of the incredible force of nature before my eyes.

A tumbling rock, slapped the mountain side.

The resounding crash vibrated through my feet.

A shiver, that had nothing to do with the sinking sun, wracked my frame.

If I had ever needed proof of God, I was witnessing Him at that moment.

There I stood, weeping with awe, fourteen.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 8/1/2012 4:54:00 AM
Samantha a warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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