Jun-Jun Villanueva Poet Acrostic

' Four-Season-Fall '

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SULTRY zephyr's gust incinerate milieu
Estival breath perfumed the whimsical view
Perfect metamorphosed season ensued
Torrid wind whistled as fall foliage mind-glued
Exquisite maple leaves cascade in vivid red - auburn dyes
Moon of AUTUMN's nocturnal murk in premature soar - in it's crib, he lies
Bursting colours of halcyon "era" - gilt, aureate carpet of terra firma
Enticing, alluring realm cuddled with perky pigments, WINTER's ready and waiting
Reminiscing the "SEPTEMBER FALL" is harking back from my myriad tears in SPRING.

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*-* jun-jun villanueva

*-* Carol Brown's FALL contest

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Lee Ramage September 8, 2011 at 12:09 AM Hi Jun-jun, congratulations on your win. You paint a lovely picture of the four seasons. Well done. Lee

Cyndi Macmillan September 7, 2011 at 10:09 PM This is awesome. Gilt, areate carpet is BRILLIANT like seeing the intricate pattern of a spider's web to closely examine the patterns YOU have woven here. Prime stuff! Cheers and congrats on your win, Cyndi

Dr.Ram Mehta September 7, 2011 at 10:05 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,jun-jun

John Freeman September 7, 2011 at 9:17 PM Jun, Nice poem. Congratulations on your worthy poem's third place. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick September 7, 2011 at 7:32 PM Congrats on your great win in Carol's contest..Sara

Jack Horne September 7, 2011 at 4:55 PM Many congrats to you, Junjun : )

David Williams September 7, 2011 at 2:16 PM hey jun-jun congrats on your win, very vivid really loved this one..David

Carolyn Devonshire September 7, 2011 at 1:58 PM Beautiful description of autumn, Jun-Jun, and I really enjoyed the last two lines. Nice bit of introspection there. In winter we pray for spring, in summer we pray for fall. Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud September 7, 2011 at 1:32 PM your words overflow, jun!..… a happy blast of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 7, 2011 at 11:25 AM congrats jun-jun on third place win with this cool write on Fall my friend.. superbly done..luv..

Caryl Ramsdale September 7, 2011 at 11:22 AM Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR

Carol Sunshine Brown September 7, 2011 at 10:51 AM Congratulations on your placement in my contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown September 3, 2011 at 8:47 AM Thank you for supporting my contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol

Judy Ball September 3, 2011 at 6:17 AM A fine entry for the contest Jun Jun. Good luck and thannks so much for the heads up on my contest entry. I hadn't seen where it said no names in the rules. I fixed it. :) God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich September 2, 2011 at 10:56 PM Hi,jun jun. YOu covered a lot of seasonal ground with your entry Best of luck in the contest and a good night to you.Luv, Andrea