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Four Snowflakes

Four Snowflakes One little snowflake hits the river so gently then gone forever. One lonely snowflake descends into the river nevermore to roam. One cold white snowflake comes flying in the windstorm adding to the load. The last snowflake falls making chills that last too long settling on his grave. 6/03/14

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Date: 6/9/2014 4:04:00 PM
you are welcome
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Date: 6/9/2014 8:22:00 AM
Noelle,, awesome haiku... Enjoyed the imagery..... Linda
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 6/9/2014 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Linda for your nice comments...Noelle
Date: 6/5/2014 4:47:00 AM
Very poignant... gave me goosebumps when I read it. Well written!!
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 6/5/2014 3:17:00 PM
Thank you John for the nice comments...Noelle
Date: 6/4/2014 6:38:00 AM
So soft with a big punch at the end. Wonderful writing Noelle. bfn Lainie
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 6/4/2014 6:20:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comments...Noelle
Date: 6/4/2014 5:36:00 AM
Lovely expressions on nature, Noelle
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 6/4/2014 6:20:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comments...Noelle
Date: 6/3/2014 6:38:00 PM
The cheerful ones pile up for us to enjoy their beauty and play on and play with.. Love this little gem my friend!!!!
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 6/4/2014 6:19:00 PM
Thank you for the nice kind comments...Noelle
Date: 6/3/2014 2:56:00 PM
Lovely but melancholy write - thank you for sharing!
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 6/4/2014 6:18:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comments...Noelle

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