Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

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February 19, 2024
Placed 1st: Four by Four Poetry Contest, by Joseph May

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Four Seasons

Verdant prairies, lush foothills,
Yellow tulips, golden daffodils,
Waltzing with magnolia’s zeal
Flamboyant in spring’s appeal.

Thundering showers, mirthful bees,
Burbling rivers, roaring seas,
Birds chirping, roaming carefree,
Buoyant, reveling summer’s glee.

Autumn paints crimson themes
Dyeing leaves, charming dreams,
Swaying vistas, iridescent trees,
Whirling frolicking amber breeze.

Shuddering boughs, winds blow,
Scattering delicate falling snow,
Shivering knolls, terrains aglow,
Glistening twilight’s wintry glow.

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Duke Beaufort February 25, 2024 at 4:31 AM Wonderful descriptions of each season Vijay. A pleasure to read this and think of the images one by one that you created.

Silent One February 24, 2024 at 10:41 AM I thought I had commented on this one... This is an excellent entry for this contest, not seen how it placed but the usage of words is excellent... The use of assonance is really good and it rhymes perfectly.. This one must have been a top winner!

Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen February 24, 2024 at 4:35 AM Love love love this awesome word play adorable write. Blessings

Susan Ashley February 23, 2024 at 6:19 PM Dear Vijay, each season captured with poetic delight as the finesses of your golden pen spills ink of vibrant imagery and seasonal textures. Belated congrats for your wonderful win, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sotto Poet February 23, 2024 at 12:54 PM Marvelous, undeniably extraordinary. A composition of utmost brilliance, unquestionably deserving of acclaim. Vijay, your poetic creation seamlessly mirrors the graceful passage from one season to another. The enchanting rhythm and harmonious rhymes are nothing short of awe-inspiring. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.

Sam Kauffman February 23, 2024 at 11:03 AM Vijay, this poems flows like the smooth transition from one season to the next. Wonderful lyric cadence and rhymes. Congratulations on your win. So fun to share the podium with you! Blessings!

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 22, 2024 at 2:44 PM Natural delights are in abundance in this tale of the seasons, Vijay. Delighted congratulations on your win. Best wishes. :)

Kim Rodrigues February 21, 2024 at 3:26 PM Congratulations, Vijay! Lovely scenery!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 21, 2024 at 10:54 AM - Back with a well-deserved congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs

Ink Empress February 21, 2024 at 3:58 AM How beautiful is this dear vijay! So descriptive and creative how youv painted imagery of various seasons, as always i enjoyed autumn the most but the opening stanza too is so very soul warming and captivating! The way youv written this shows us readers what you are describing! I heard birds chirping to roaring seas and tulips and crimson themes of autumn. So mesmerizing and artistic. And impressive rhymes too! You are always so good at rhymes! Pleasure reading this poetic gem. Fave for sure

Andrea Dietrich February 20, 2024 at 9:19 PM Back with my congrats, Vijay

Joseph May February 20, 2024 at 5:20 PM Very nicely done Vijay, Congrats on your win

Demetrios Trifiatis February 20, 2024 at 4:45 PM A rapturous symphony of seasons, my dearest friend, Vijay! It leaves one spellbound by listening to its melody. Blessings.

Brandy Nicole February 20, 2024 at 11:24 AM Elegance, a soft and sultry touch curl around Spring and Summer. Authentic beauty moves through Autumn, while numbing moments mingle in Winter. Every season is so beautifully expressed within. My best to you, Vijay. :) Hugs, Brandy Vijay Pandit February 20, 2024 at 12:39 PM I really liked the way you elaborated your thoughts exploring every season, my friend. Much appreciate your insights, Brandy. Thank you for being there. Hugs to you as well.

Hiya Sharma February 20, 2024 at 9:43 AM What a magnificent and magical poem this is!! You've so gloriously marked spring's arrival with absolutely lush imagery, breathing in myriad fragrances of elegance.. I'm so enchanted by your use of colours, flowers and rhymes in such a mesmerizing way.. There's always a profound richness in your wordplay, that's so unique about your writing style! "Autumn paints crimson themes","Waltzing with magnolia’s zeal", "twilight’s wintry glow" Loved reading this so much, a FAV indeed, sending best wishes Vijay Pandit February 20, 2024 at 12:37 PM Glad to hear that from a gifted poet. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Hiya. Thank you for taking the time to write detailed insights and thank you for your FAVE.

Heidi Sands February 20, 2024 at 5:44 AM You have described the seasons beautifully and I enjoyed traveling through them with your words this morning. A Fave for me. So nice Vijay :) Vijay Pandit February 20, 2024 at 12:34 PM So wonderful to hear that from you, my friend. Much appreciate you being there--and much appreciate your FAVE. Many thanks, Heidi.

Tom Cunningham February 20, 2024 at 5:11 AM A journey through the seasons Vijay, thankfully winter is behind us and we can look forward to brighter and warmer days. Just back from my travels, hope your keeping well. Tom Vijay Pandit February 20, 2024 at 12:42 PM I am sure you had a wonderful time visiting--vacationing. Much appreciate your feedback, Tom. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar February 20, 2024 at 3:23 AM Wonderful descriptions of the seas going inland of flowering prairies. A canvas of imagery worthy of the best of the contest. Vijay Pandit February 20, 2024 at 12:33 PM Glad you liked the poem, Victor. Much appreciate your feedback--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 20, 2024 at 3:10 AM - Charming seasons all four ... best wishes in the contest, Vijay :) - hugs ? Vijay Pandit February 20, 2024 at 12:33 PM Much appreciate, Anne-Lise--many thanks. Hugs to you as well.

Bill Baker February 19, 2024 at 6:37 PM Lovely rhyming in this entry, Vijay. Great imagery and a nice rhythm as you described each season. This poem should receive high marks in the contest, my friend. A FAV for my list! A poet friend in Texas, Bill Vijay Pandit February 20, 2024 at 12:32 PM Much appreciate your vote of confidence, my poet friend from Texas. Thank you for your presence on my page and your FAVE. Appreciate, as always. Many thanks, Bill.

Andrea Dietrich February 19, 2024 at 3:41 PM Wonderful job with this one. So creative Vijay Pandit February 20, 2024 at 12:29 PM Nice to hear that--especially from you, Andrea. Much appreciate--many thanks

Sara Kendrick February 19, 2024 at 2:23 PM Ahh!! I like this one. If it is for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K Vijay Pandit February 20, 2024 at 12:29 PM Thank you Sara--much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.