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Four Seasons

Verdant prairies, lush foothills,
Yellow tulips, golden daffodils,
Waltzing with magnolia’s zeal
Flamboyant in spring’s appeal.

Thundering showers, mirthful bees,
Burbling rivers, roaring seas,
Birds chirping, roaming carefree,
Buoyant, reveling summer’s glee.

Autumn paints crimson themes
Dyeing leaves, charming dreams,
Swaying vistas, iridescent trees,
Whirling frolicking amber breeze.

Shuddering boughs, winds blow,
Scattering delicate falling snow,
Shivering knolls, terrains aglow,
Glistening twilight’s wintry glow.

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Duke Beaufort Date: 2/25/2024 4:31:00 AM Wonderful descriptions of each season Vijay. A pleasure to read this and think of the images one by one that you created. Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 2/24/2024 10:41:00 AM I thought I had commented on this one... This is an excellent entry for this contest, not seen how it placed but the usage of words is excellent... The use of assonance is really good and it rhymes perfectly.. This one must have been a top winner! Login to Reply

Yolanda Nicholsen Date: 2/24/2024 4:35:00 AM Love love love this awesome word play adorable write. Blessings Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 2/23/2024 6:19:00 PM Dear Vijay, each season captured with poetic delight as the finesses of your golden pen spills ink of vibrant imagery and seasonal textures. Belated congrats for your wonderful win, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 2/23/2024 12:54:00 PM Marvelous, undeniably extraordinary. A composition of utmost brilliance, unquestionably deserving of acclaim. Vijay, your poetic creation seamlessly mirrors the graceful passage from one season to another. The enchanting rhythm and harmonious rhymes are nothing short of awe-inspiring. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 2/23/2024 11:03:00 AM Vijay, this poems flows like the smooth transition from one season to the next. Wonderful lyric cadence and rhymes. Congratulations on your win. So fun to share the podium with you! Blessings! Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 2/22/2024 2:44:00 PM Natural delights are in abundance in this tale of the seasons, Vijay. Delighted congratulations on your win. Best wishes. :) Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/21/2024 3:26:00 PM Congratulations, Vijay! Lovely scenery! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/21/2024 10:54:00 AM - Back with a well-deserved congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 2/21/2024 3:58:00 AM How beautiful is this dear vijay! So descriptive and creative how youv painted imagery of various seasons, as always i enjoyed autumn the most but the opening stanza too is so very soul warming and captivating! The way youv written this shows us readers what you are describing! I heard birds chirping to roaring seas and tulips and crimson themes of autumn. So mesmerizing and artistic. And impressive rhymes too! You are always so good at rhymes! Pleasure reading this poetic gem. Fave for sure Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/20/2024 9:19:00 PM Back with my congrats, Vijay Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 2/20/2024 5:20:00 PM Very nicely done Vijay, Congrats on your win Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/20/2024 4:45:00 PM A rapturous symphony of seasons, my dearest friend, Vijay! It leaves one spellbound by listening to its melody. Blessings. Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 2/20/2024 11:24:00 AM Elegance, a soft and sultry touch curl around Spring and Summer. Authentic beauty moves through Autumn, while numbing moments mingle in Winter. Every season is so beautifully expressed within. My best to you, Vijay. :) Hugs, Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/20/2024 12:39:00 PM I really liked the way you elaborated your thoughts exploring every season, my friend. Much appreciate your insights, Brandy. Thank you for being there. Hugs to you as well.

Hiya Sharma Date: 2/20/2024 9:43:00 AM What a magnificent and magical poem this is!! You've so gloriously marked spring's arrival with absolutely lush imagery, breathing in myriad fragrances of elegance.. I'm so enchanted by your use of colours, flowers and rhymes in such a mesmerizing way.. There's always a profound richness in your wordplay, that's so unique about your writing style! "Autumn paints crimson themes","Waltzing with magnolia’s zeal", "twilight’s wintry glow" Loved reading this so much, a FAV indeed, sending best wishes Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/20/2024 12:37:00 PM Glad to hear that from a gifted poet. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Hiya. Thank you for taking the time to write detailed insights and thank you for your FAVE.

Heidi Sands Date: 2/20/2024 5:44:00 AM You have described the seasons beautifully and I enjoyed traveling through them with your words this morning. A Fave for me. So nice Vijay :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/20/2024 12:34:00 PM So wonderful to hear that from you, my friend. Much appreciate you being there--and much appreciate your FAVE. Many thanks, Heidi.

Tom Cunningham Date: 2/20/2024 5:11:00 AM A journey through the seasons Vijay, thankfully winter is behind us and we can look forward to brighter and warmer days. Just back from my travels, hope your keeping well. Tom Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/20/2024 12:42:00 PM I am sure you had a wonderful time visiting--vacationing. Much appreciate your feedback, Tom. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 2/20/2024 3:23:00 AM Wonderful descriptions of the seas going inland of flowering prairies. A canvas of imagery worthy of the best of the contest. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/20/2024 12:33:00 PM Glad you liked the poem, Victor. Much appreciate your feedback--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/20/2024 3:10:00 AM - Charming seasons all four ... best wishes in the contest, Vijay :) - hugs ? Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/20/2024 12:33:00 PM Much appreciate, Anne-Lise--many thanks. Hugs to you as well.

Bill Baker Date: 2/19/2024 6:37:00 PM Lovely rhyming in this entry, Vijay. Great imagery and a nice rhythm as you described each season. This poem should receive high marks in the contest, my friend. A FAV for my list! A poet friend in Texas, Bill Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/20/2024 12:32:00 PM Much appreciate your vote of confidence, my poet friend from Texas. Thank you for your presence on my page and your FAVE. Appreciate, as always. Many thanks, Bill.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/19/2024 3:41:00 PM Wonderful job with this one. So creative Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/20/2024 12:29:00 PM Nice to hear that--especially from you, Andrea. Much appreciate--many thanks

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/19/2024 2:23:00 PM Ahh!! I like this one. If it is for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/20/2024 12:29:00 PM Thank you Sara--much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.