Four Season Sun Heat

sky weeping ice tears
hanging water lamps on branches
sparkling diamonds smiles

earth turns to sun heat
liquifying its icy heart
sprouting spring love joy

sun simmering heat
turns fruits sourness honey sweet
with life starting seeds

harvest thanksgiving
prayer leaves carried by wind
return with blessings


First Place Winner: Brian Strand 1,2 or 3 Lines Contest-8/7/21
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Kendrick Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 7:32 AM
Back with congrats. Powerful winning work, Sara
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 11:20 AM
a nice set of seasonal haiku. Congrats for your win, Frances
Alex Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 6:50 AM
Wonderful. Congratulations on your win!
Kendrick Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Ahh!! We need some of those tears but not the frozen kind. Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Kendrick Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 7:35 AM
Yes, there are icy hearts about 2 % of the population of the world are psychopathic personalities some are serial killers and some just go about life hurting others and some are criminals in other ways. Then there are those that are sociopathic personalities which I am sure is more than 2 % of the population who do have some remorse but still do wrong. Sara
Schiavina Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 5:59 AM
Agree but in reality there is icy hearts that kill, rape, steal even from the mouth of the poor without remorse and without prayer will not turn to God to be defrosted,
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