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Four Mice

Four mice were hungry what to do One said, "That trap cheese I will chew!" "I'll get that cheese with no mishap!" "Like this I'll run up and....." SNAP! Three starving mice sure miss their bro One said, "To me, he seemed real slow." He said, "Watch me raid that little trap!" "I'm fast, it's easy if I..." SNAP! Two famished mice now feeling sick What should they do? What is the trick? One said be sneaky like their Pap He quietly sneaked up and SNAP! One lonely mouse is half dead Because he was a clever chap "Now I see the problem!", he said "We should not have reset the Trap!"

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Date: 11/6/2017 9:20:00 PM
Lol, this poem is really cute; and the reply back to Johns comment is funny too!~Che :)
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Pat Adams
Date: 11/7/2017 5:55:00 PM
Well, thank you Cheryl. I think the only people that see the replies are other people commenting! For instance you probably won't even see this! (Oh..well......never mind)...Pat
Date: 11/5/2017 10:04:00 AM
GOTD! I really do appreciate how your mind unravels!!! ~ john
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Pat Adams
Date: 11/5/2017 3:50:00 PM
Thanks!.....(I think!!).......Nice to know you are lurking....I mean...relaxing in the shadows!!!!..........P

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