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Four Little Words

Thank mom for caring enough to rear and nurture me .... To teach me all I need to know to be an adult successfully ... The things you've done and love you've shown have guided me along ... An enabled me to realise what is right and what is wrong... Important lessons I have learned , throughout the years gone by .... To be like you , I aim to be ,or at least I'd like to try .... The path you forged is sometimes hard , but carefully you led .... I LOVE YOU MOM .... four little words that often go unsaid....

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Date: 3/16/2014 9:11:00 PM
This is another nicely written poem with good descriptiveness and rhyming. However, it should be classified as a "rhyme" in lieu of an "acrostic". I will show you an example of an acrostic poem I wrote and submitted here myself: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=270826
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Date: 3/16/2014 6:27:00 PM
A nice tribute to your mom! Love, Kim
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