Four Line Book

Like a little child
all other lives, writing fates
in their own four-lines.
On single lines, humans scrawl,
but some are still in four lines.



Honorable Mention in STRAND SELECT P any form,any theme sponsored by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Smalls Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 9:30 PM
Jenish, a lot is said with so few words. Excellent writing. Thanks for sharing this. Peace and blessings.
Somadas Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 7:09 AM
Thank you Juanita for your wonderful comment..
Roper Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 8:10 PM
Jenish, fates in their own four-lines while others on a one single line. Nicely said.
Somadas Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 9:32 PM
Thank you Eve..All other living beings except humans are living a restricted life..Whereas humans have great opportunity to express and grow using their intellect and imagination.. But some are living as animals not aware of their immense power..
Wolf Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 12:56 PM
Continue with that poem in the journal; carry on to the second embrace! You've got another winner there, sir! Congrats, Jenish! :) Gershon
Somadas Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 10:28 PM
Thank you Gershon for the poetic comment and your kind support always..
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 6:01 PM
I enjoyed this one and the analogy of life to lines written on a page. Congrats in the contest.
Somadas Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 10:32 PM
Thank you Andrea for that delightful comment.. Have a great day..
Trifiatis Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 3:34 AM
So true dearest, Jenish but give them more time and who knows one day they may improve! Profound! Hugs xxx
Somadas Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 4:05 AM
Thank you Demetrios.. I think you are feeling well now..Takecare..
Karmakar Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 11:54 AM
Very nice realization and presentation. Wishing the best dear poet. Regards. sk.
Somadas Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 12:30 PM
Thank you so much for your delightful comment dear Sanjay..
Y. Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 6:57 AM
Hi Jenish, You’ve penned an impactful write with good content that I will read again! Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Somadas Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 7:12 AM
Thank you Alexis for your support and wonderful comment...
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