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Four Line Book

Like a little child all other lives, writing fates in their own four-lines. On single lines, humans scrawl, but some are still in four lines. Honorable Mention in STRAND SELECT P any form,any theme sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 2/24/2020 9:30:00 PM
Jenish, a lot is said with so few words. Excellent writing. Thanks for sharing this. Peace and blessings.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/25/2020 7:09:00 AM
Thank you Juanita for your wonderful comment..
Date: 2/18/2020 8:10:00 PM
Jenish, fates in their own four-lines while others on a one single line. Nicely said.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/18/2020 9:32:00 PM
Thank you Eve..All other living beings except humans are living a restricted life..Whereas humans have great opportunity to express and grow using their intellect and imagination.. But some are living as animals not aware of their immense power..
Date: 2/17/2020 12:56:00 PM
Continue with that poem in the journal; carry on to the second embrace! You've got another winner there, sir! Congrats, Jenish! :) Gershon
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/17/2020 10:28:00 PM
Thank you Gershon for the poetic comment and your kind support always..
Date: 2/15/2020 6:01:00 PM
I enjoyed this one and the analogy of life to lines written on a page. Congrats in the contest.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/15/2020 10:32:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for that delightful comment.. Have a great day..
Date: 2/15/2020 3:34:00 AM
So true dearest, Jenish but give them more time and who knows one day they may improve! Profound! Hugs xxx
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/15/2020 4:05:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios.. I think you are feeling well now..Takecare..
Date: 2/14/2020 11:54:00 AM
Very nice realization and presentation. Wishing the best dear poet. Regards. sk.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/14/2020 12:30:00 PM
Thank you so much for your delightful comment dear Sanjay..
Date: 2/14/2020 6:57:00 AM
Hi Jenish, You’ve penned an impactful write with good content that I will read again! Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/14/2020 7:12:00 AM
Thank you Alexis for your support and wonderful comment...

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