Four Haikus

1.
one with the music 
a vestibule for magic 
love fills warm the air
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2.
bonsai beautiful 
with white scented blossoms grow
though old still virile
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3.
gold red swirls and curves 
 the frozen flames light the night 
save me brave fireheart
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4.
scampers a bright moon 
gifts liquid life a lit view 
watch them rendezvous
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Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 12:50 AM
gosh, i found way back here the type of creative haiku I believe that the one contest was looking for! Too bad these are not new ones. they would have been ideal. I can't even decide which I like best, but I think the last two are my favorites. A soupmail for you soon.
A   Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 11:05 AM
Hola, Maurice, stopping by to read, and check out the comment you left on my comment.. awesome...LINDA
Fraser Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 5:37 PM
Music, bonsai, against a new moon. There's no better sight in natures front room. Fine set of Haiku Maurice, James :)
Yvonne Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 5:48 PM
thank you James.
A   Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 12:52 PM
Hola, Maurice, I done forgot what I was talking about... Starting a new day here at the soup... Hope you are well....LINDA
Yvonne Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 1:07 PM
Hola, Linda.
A   Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 11:05 PM
LOL, before you think, I forgot... this is a triple tag, .. Tag Tag Tag, your it
Yvonne Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 7:31 AM
i never forget. what were we talking about.
A   Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 11:04 PM
You have 4 haiku here. I love the second one the most, something about that bonsai, that's hypnotic... A classy way in freshen up the air, ...Linda
Yvonne Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 11:16 PM
it's because it is old and virile. it reminds you of me.
Mehta Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 10:04 AM
Lovely string haiku on beauty,Maurice
Yvonne Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 7:14 PM
thank you for your kind words.
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