Four For Fore

For this poem to work, I need four in the fore, that's what I’m looking for. For the four in the fore it may become a bit of a bore Because the four in the fore need to know the score It’s Debbie not me that wants the four in the fore, who the heck knows what for…? ~GG~ 14/11/2012

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Rollo West

Date: 11/14/2012 9:54:00 AM

This is really outstanding. If your not going to use it, can I borrow? LOL Rollo

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/14/2012 9:59:00 AM

Why thank you Rollo, too kind sir, too kind xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/14/2012 9:02:00 AM

Oh that complex 200 dollar brain of yours, will totally bamboozles some here on soup...i love this it flows, and shows how brilliant you are...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/14/2012 10:00:00 AM

you dear sir are biased, and I love it xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/14/2012 7:10:00 AM

Oh my silly Goldie, I will not accept this as the best 4 lines you have ever written cause I know better!! FORGET about the words, just give me 4 of your best lines...silly one! I don't care if you pull them from another poem..come on, I want to place you. XXOO

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/14/2012 7:20:00 AM

Big Lol , okay will do a proper one ha ha