Alkas Poetry Poet Free verse

Four Elements

Clay to model
                 shapes
                 Water to support
                 encouragement
                  Fire to supply,
                  heat...
                  air to create
                  blow
                In the large crucible
                of nature only
                four essences
                to create life ...
                So that the universe
                can vibrate!


    After reading Liliana Bodoc

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Kurt Ravidas May 31, 2019 at 12:27 PM I agree with you, Alkas. The ether here is just for the sake of eloquence) Although, I really understand the ether as a spirituality of emptiness. The void is not empty. Even the real Buddhist emptiness shines like a thousand suns and sounds like a thousand thunders.

Kurt Ravidas May 30, 2019 at 10:41 AM Espera um segundo, meu querido poeta brasileiro. E o éter? The universe doesn't vibrate in void) Alkas Poetry May 31, 2019 at 4:17 AM Dear poet Kurt Ravidas.. Não é ``ETER... As long as there existence of the elements, there is creation, there is energy... the universe is energy even in void...The light propagates in void, There also poetic license of writing... Poetry is not exact science... poetry is thinking all forms and daydream...There is the spiritual way of seeing things...Quantum vacuum is God.