Four Billion Years

Our Solar System is over four billion years old It'll probably last another 5000 million, we're told Whew! Had me pooping My drawers they were drooping Glad I've only got a few more years till I fold
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Cresswell Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 9:48 PM
That will be great loss believe me.
Ellison Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 5:59 AM
AWWW!!! You sure know how to make my sun shine!!! Lovesies! xxx
Flats Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 9:45 AM
Must have been a heckuva dance//With all that poo in your pants//while the solars flared//Were you scared//you'd trip on your droopers by chance? ROLL ON JACKSON!!!
Ellison Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 9:54 AM
Hey I'm a talented dude!!! Come to me if you need assistance Sir John John!!! ROLL ON SIR JOHN JOHN!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Lol ;) xomo!
Ellison Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:32 AM
Don't think any of us on the planet have anything to worry about!!! HAVE A SPECIAL LOVING DAY dear Mo xxx
Sivey Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 6:18 AM
Yes, we'll not see the end of the solar system, as a human anyway! I foresee the sun blowing up to take the Earth on it's way! I really enjoyed reading your illustrious poem here this morning! You have written such a funny limerick, I lol, truly I did! What a fabulous piece my friend, Great Work!!
Ellison Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 6:54 AM
Nope... don't plan to live that long! However, with today's technology??????????
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