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Four Billion Years

Our Solar System is over four billion years old It'll probably last another 5000 million, we're told Whew! Had me pooping My drawers they were drooping Glad I've only got a few more years till I fold

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/20/2017 9:48:00 PM

That will be great loss believe me.

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/21/2017 5:59:00 AM

AWWW!!! You sure know how to make my sun shine!!! Lovesies! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/20/2017 9:45:00 AM

Must have been a heckuva dance//With all that poo in your pants//while the solars flared//Were you scared//you'd trip on your droopers by chance? ROLL ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/20/2017 9:54:00 AM

Hey I'm a talented dude!!! Come to me if you need assistance Sir John John!!! ROLL ON SIR JOHN JOHN!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/20/2017 8:27:00 AM

Lol ;) xomo!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/20/2017 8:32:00 AM

Don't think any of us on the planet have anything to worry about!!! HAVE A SPECIAL LOVING DAY dear Mo xxx

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/20/2017 6:18:00 AM

Yes, we'll not see the end of the solar system, as a human anyway! I foresee the sun blowing up to take the Earth on it's way! I really enjoyed reading your illustrious poem here this morning! You have written such a funny limerick, I lol, truly I did! What a fabulous piece my friend, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/20/2017 6:54:00 AM

Nope... don't plan to live that long! However, with today's technology??????????