Fountains

hot summer's day -
  children play in
  gushing fountains
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Pettit Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 4:45 PM
Children of all ages won't be playing in fountains any time soon. We are in the middle of winter. Good write.
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 6:15 PM
a nice image. MAkes me long for summer
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