Lucifer Very Very Very 1st Poet Free verse

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my writing is called philosophical writing. i only uses middle ages words,words from the renaissance. for instance words liked gracious,extravaganza,etc... this poem is about heaven young,heaven old,heaven hell. i don’t add capitalization’s on my writing.

fountain of youth

hell is a fountain of youth
the age of a fountain is the age of a youth
the age of a fountain is the age of hell
hell is a ageless youth
hell is a ageless fountain
paradise is a ageless hell
paradise is a older hell

heaven is older than hell
heaven is older than paradise
heaven is a older hell
fountain of youth is a older fountain of youth
old is older than heaven
old is older than a fountain of youth
the young and the youth is the old and the youth

young is a younger youth
young is younger than heaven
young is younger than hell
young is younger than a fountain of youth
paradise is a young paradise
paradise is a young heaven
paradise is a young hell

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