Fountain of Youth

What if fountain of youth is a door in your mind 
That yellow you can emerald enter anytime 

Unlocking universes using red heart as silver scale
The more passionate you are the sooner you’ll get there
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 8:06 PM
Reads like a stoplight to me. And always go on yellow!! Tee-hee
Jones Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 1:42 AM
lol hugs Gershon!
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 3:54 PM
Hello Karen, You know , that would be wonderful. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 11:03 AM
Hello Karen, Oh, yes it would. Karen. Hugs. /Darlene/
Jones Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 4:24 PM
Yes it would! Thanks Darlene hugs back!
Buhagiar Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 6:39 AM
The fountain of youth is not enough, dear Karen. We also need the fountain of health. Hugs.
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