09/12/19
Second Place
Picturesque Contest by Eve Roper
Forcefully flung fast frolic fountain from deep core in chasm of mountain, grey grave gravels to entertain. Stiff cliff up on high altitude Water falling in plenitude. Splattering splintering solitude Vivacious spirited spring. Lovely water droplets to sing. Jingle bells of pebbles to ring . Gorgeous fall immense intense oozes, cascades in opulence deserving respect reverence. Ceaseless downpour in joy and spree sprinkling aqua drops in glee Lively waterfall dancing free.
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