Foundation of Dawn

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Dawn brings tenderest dewdrop dreams Breathtaking promises will sing Inviting joy in soft sunbeams Blazing paths with sweetness of spring First light whispers gentle traces Amazing the spirit, praising Combining kind hope, peace, graces Abiding in hearts, amazing Beginning new days, gardening Promising, illuminations Love abides, never hardening Inside there grows fond relations Gardens of love, inspirations Wonders of the heart’s foundations Sonnet Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sotto Poet May 19, 2023

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/15/2023 12:52:00 PM

With hope and grace your garden grows and blooms, Gina. Such a lovely spirit to your sonnet. Congratulations on your win sweet friend. Blessings and hugs!

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/12/2023 10:57:00 AM

This piece is truly remarkable and commands great power. I extend my warmest congratulations for your well-deserved Win.

Timothy Ray

Date: 5/19/2023 5:54:00 PM

what i admire most is your ability to draw so many great images and then tie them into the better quales that pepper sweet life in a given framework as Edna St. Vincent Millay did....i simply stand in awe of such an ability...this is a great opening to a most wonderous season....well done

Paige Hind

Date: 5/19/2023 11:01:00 AM

I loved your sonnet; it flows very well! Loved your depictions.