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Then one day...
in the dark,  in the dark
in the deep,  deep dark 
a bright speck floated,  invisible as dreams,  special as Love. 

The last word was only a 
whisper, 
barely understood, and then
there was no more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Agustin Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 7:46 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Warlov Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 7:26 PM
How old . . . write something new . . . we're family too . . . any good jokes?
Amato Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 1:44 AM
Robert, you're right How old. new is needed here Family, thank you. Joke? She has pimples on her but she is nice.
Greenhough Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 11:55 AM
The whisper grabbed my attention. So many dreams can only be remembered as foggy memories. A great poem.
Blake Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 7:32 AM
Interesting poem
Newbey Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 6:34 AM
hey , i like this ! good job ! good luck !
Walker Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 4:23 AM
Beautifully written, complete..
Pandit Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 12:44 PM
Intriguing write, Tamra. Very cleverly scripted.
Proxenos Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 12:53 AM
A very clever write Tamra, I will be visiting your page from today on-wards. Hugs, blessings Jennifer.
Walker Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 3:07 AM
Beautifully done, Tamara! What a wonderful answer to that question we get so often "Where do you get your inspiration?"
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