Found Paradise

I never really realized How important friends can be I used to think that one or two Would be enough for me But now I think I'm changing How I view this need to share The good things and the heartaches With ones who really care We moved here from the city With a group of folks like us To wile away our golden years To relax and avoid the fuss Since moving to this paradise I'm now a different man I welcome conversations Bout neighbours and their plans To share each other's happiness And cry when losing one We're all so very much alike No matter where we're from It's not a competition To see who wins the prize It's all about companionship To feel the bonds that tie Now if I were just to count them There'd be twenty-five I'm sure Some more close than others But all of them top drawer So if you see me walking tall And whistling a happy tune It's because I've found my paradise No more doom and gloom © Jack Ellison 2014
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Date: 9/13/2014 1:40:00 PM
Wonderful write Jack. It's so true too! - TLH
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/14/2014 6:42:00 AM
Much appreciated Tanya... don't be a stranger! Loving hugs, Jack! XOXOX
Date: 9/13/2014 10:16:00 AM
Dragon wants more page time and is sitting on me, to try to get me to write. Dumb Dragon! I found a oldster group Friday mornings at MickyD's. Dragon and his penguins came along, of course! They kept the oldsters entertained. We're probably the only MickyD's left with a play area. Grandpa Troll came to supervise.(Actually he loves sitting in the ball pit and supervising). Go figure. Who would have known! Got each a chocolate milk when the play was done. I got some quality time with the oldsters.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/14/2014 6:41:00 AM
Hang on dear Carol... hang on!!! Loving hugs XOXOX
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Carol Eastman
Date: 9/13/2014 10:18:00 AM
PS. Paradise isn't lost on me. I hang on tightly to that there brass ring... LOL Love you guys.
Date: 9/13/2014 7:29:00 AM
Glad to know that Jack! Love ur paradise,, trust I am one of the mentioned that make u whistle !
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/13/2014 7:34:00 AM
My dear doctor, you're at the top of my list! Hear me whistling? Love ya... XOXOX
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