Found My Way

Fragrant fields of flowers 
tease 
my every sense
As my feet
frequent forests 
of each brand new day
Forever finding feelings 
within this once 
hollow man
Free finally to find, 
what now 
I call my way
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 14, 2008 at 4:10 PM
Creative use of alliteration to add a rhythm to this poem. Interesting perspective. I enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing it. Karen
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October 13, 2008 at 8:24 AM
This poem lightens the heart on a dark cold day! Thank you for the cheer! :) ~ Carrie
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October 13, 2008 at 8:22 AM
Walk your walk, and talk your talk, dance your own dance, always. lovely poem my friend, love K
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