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Found My Butterfly Wings

My life wrapped up in so few words A paradox of convoluted simplicity There’s basically what came before~ then what came after you With you intrinsically at the core the heart of my life All in all it’s been one long winding scenic roadtrip With polychromatic memories and treasures amassed All culminating now into this one bubbling cauldron I am pressed by a sense of urgency to make up for lost time Once the soul of an artist trapped in a butterfly without wings I now feel whole and compelled to creativity and leave my legacy AP: 2nd place 2020 Submitted on September 27, 2019 for contest STORY OF MY LIFE IN TEN LINES sponsored by SILENT ONE - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 10/6/2019 12:04:00 PM
- Congratulations Line, on your 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/6/2019 2:16:00 PM
Thanks, Sunshine. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/4/2019 4:53:00 PM
A sum of the total Line who is creating wonderful poetry for us. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/4/2019 5:57:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Jeanne.
Date: 10/4/2019 3:55:00 PM
A very philosophical take on the contest.. great poem Line.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/4/2019 5:58:00 PM
Thanks for the opportunity and inspiration, Silent One. Most appreciated.
Date: 9/29/2019 4:11:00 PM
Well done, you say a cauldron, I say you are like a geyser that spews out loveliness when your heart fills up. You wrote in ten lines but many more lines could be written about the artist called LINE
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Date: 9/29/2019 7:44:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Timothy. Most appreciated.
Date: 9/29/2019 3:10:00 PM
Those last few lines -- the butterfly released -- that's the Line I know. Nicely penned and authentic! :) gw
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Date: 9/29/2019 7:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Date: 9/28/2019 1:50:00 AM
"A paradox of convoluted simplicity" What a wonderful line to a wonderful poem by a wonderful poetess, my friend,Line. Pun intended.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/28/2019 7:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren. I can't wait to read your 10-line autobiography.
Date: 9/28/2019 12:07:00 AM
Awesome title and final line... I truly enjoyed this gem and believe it will do in the contest. Blessings on you
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Date: 9/28/2019 7:57:00 AM
Thanks, Regina. Most appreciated.

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