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2026-02-12 Write A Beautiful Carpe Diem Poem Poetry Contest

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Found Love at First Sight

“Dream as if you will live forever; Live as if you will die today.”
 James Dean


Found Love at First Sight

I was in a café shop, staring, wondering.
Then I saw her outside the display window.
She was extremely beautiful.
She was looking at me, not moving.
I smiled, light like a silver cloud.

For a moment, I was mesmerised.
She seemed in a hurry. I invited her in.
We sipped our drinks, which I ordered.
We spoke about ourselves and about love.

It seemed there was an allurement between us.
Indecision could not resolve our attractions.
There was a dangerous spell between us,
Something we could not easily resolve.
Was there chemistry between us?

Something lingered, I put my hand on hers.
Had we a promise neither of us dared to name?
Then, between stolen yet long glances,
A world waited vast enough to enthral us.
She showed me her train ticket for the next day.
That day, she was mine. I cared not for the next day.

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Schiavina Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 12:41 PM
Congratulations on your first-place winner poem with a brilliant ending line.
Kitchin Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 4:13 AM
Victor, back to congratulate you on your first place win.
Roper Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 10:59 PM
Very romantic and great atmosphere in your verse. Sometimes a mask is placed to catch a fish, but the wrong fish sometimes. "I cared not for the next day."
Neumann Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 1:38 AM
Living in the present ...
Kitchin Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 3:08 AM
Victor, very romantic and captivating.
Greenhough Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 8:36 AM
I've heard that love can happen ar first sight. Lucky in love is certainly yours. I enjoy this poem.
Buehler Avatar
February 28, 2026 at 9:25 PM
It was a pleasure to read this latest, wonderful love story, Victor. You write them so well. Good luck in the contest. :)
Rolland Avatar
February 28, 2026 at 3:27 PM
this is a delicious moment, when you are in love, just be natural, such and true and touching poem have a nice sunday
Singh Avatar
February 27, 2026 at 7:42 PM
So beautiful. I like it.
George Avatar
February 27, 2026 at 12:17 AM
Fascinated by her celestial presence, as you stayed doubtful, the positive nod came from her that you could be by her side the whole day. So, you thought of making the best use of that moment. Carpe diem!
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 11:47 PM
I have known this or something close to it. There is nothing else like it and then it finishes, lost in time. Great story, Victor
Edmonds  Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 9:48 PM
A lovely romantic story/poem Victor… Beryl
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 6:57 PM
Romantic. Love last two lines.
May Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 4:55 PM
Love casts its spell, Very nicely penned
Daniels Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 3:21 PM
Beautiful love Carpe Diem, Victor. I love the last line & the James Dean quote is very appropriate. B blessed.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 10:20 AM
What a beautiful write you have here. I enjoyed reading. Love the true quote. "Good Luck" I also did this contest. Have a blessed day writing away............
Sands Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 9:01 AM
I enjoyed this Victor. Very nice :)
Rodgers Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 7:47 AM
Hello Victor, your work always carries that unmistakable blend of clarity and depth, and this new piece is no exception. I’m grateful each time you share something new, your voice continues to enrich this place. Blessings, Daniel
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