Found In Communion

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Where lips crave praise, teardrops dangle on lower lash, Unabashed smiles, like the seawaves of haven’s cache. Found in communion, where robust hymns reconvene — A sanctuary, my consecrated place, sans dummy screen.* Chalice dips in river of delights — Bread of Life, my desire.* Bottoms warm on pews, hearts kindled — a passionate fire. Like a helium-filled balloon, my folded hands blossom, float, high and higher. Grateful for God, breath suspended in my throat. I could sing of his love forever and forever I will. In congregation a scrap of heaven, multihued beautiful faces — no segregation. The celebration of host and wine not in time with our liturgy. We imbibe crackers and grape juice, at home — low-key. Nevertheless we have knowledge that same-time friends likewise eat and drink, the body and blood of Jesus Christ, holy-sweet. Proverbial church bells resound - Ancient of Days replies.*** His voice thunders, lights up, astounds — words to the wise. A braided cord is my apparel, a sanctuary crown. Now you understand that the church is my hometown.
8/20/2020 Contest: Sanctuary Sponsor: Silent One Notes: *dummy screen - the façade of a television screen. **They feast on the abundance of your own house, you give them drink from your river of delights. Psalm 36:8 The root word for the Hebrew word, “delights,” ...drumroll…EDEN...wow! It is also a feminine noun with sexual connotations of pleasure and delight. Bread of Life - Mannah, Jesus ***Ancient of Days - God

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Date: 8/23/2020 12:27:00 PM
Kim, Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/22/2020 6:25:00 AM
Nice spiritual take on the contest Kim.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 8/21/2020 2:14:00 PM
Solemn verses of life, prayer, peace--excellent depiction of your sanctuary, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2020 4:11:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 8/20/2020 10:21:00 PM
Oh Kim, this is glorious and so God-honoring. A huge blessing for me to read this today. I do miss a sanctuary full of church family. All in God's time. Wonderful penning, my friend ~ John
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John Watt
Date: 8/21/2020 8:18:00 AM
We have been meeting outdoors for a month now. There is much joy in the singing together and sharing communion. I do miss the sanctuary, though. And the hugs!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2020 5:21:00 AM
My church has been back for a couple months. I am delirious with joy being back in the sanctuary.
Date: 8/20/2020 9:46:00 PM
There is no better sanctuary Kim than to be at one with God. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2020 5:19:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 8/20/2020 8:51:00 PM
Wonderful piece Kim truly a Sanctuary...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2020 5:18:00 AM
Thank you, Michael!
Date: 8/20/2020 5:11:00 PM
That last couplet -- ah, penned so genuinely... Rings so true from everything I've learned about you, my friend. Blessings and Bounty, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2020 6:36:00 PM
Thanks, sweet friend. That means a lot. Blessings in all areas of your life!
Date: 8/20/2020 3:58:00 PM
This is darling; I think it will find itself with a lei around its neck, and a trophy at its feet at the end of the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2020 6:37:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend! xx
Date: 8/20/2020 12:17:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest ... it sings a top first place in my ears :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2020 12:57:00 PM
Best wishes for you too! Thank you, sweet Anne-Lise! xx
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