Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Forward, My Feet

Forward
  My Feet

Advance
  Retreat

Forward 
  My Feet

The Foe
  To Greet

Advance 
  Retreat

Forward
  My Feet

Advance 
  Retreat

The Foe
  Deplete

Forward 
  My Feet

Advance
  Retreat
 
Forward
  My Feet

The Foe
  Delete

Mission
  Complete

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Michelle Faulkner June 18, 2021 at 12:07 PM Love the stoic bravery of this, it's all about putting one foot in front of the other (a lesson I have learned well over the past year and half!) Gershon Wolf June 18, 2021 at 12:55 PM That's the ticket, Michelle. We just gotta keep moving. :) gw

Kenneth Cheney June 18, 2021 at 11:48 AM Always moving ahead. I so enjoyed this one. Great job Gershon! Gershon Wolf June 18, 2021 at 12:52 PM As the Stooges used to say: 'Inch by inch; Step by step; Foot by Foot..' lol. Thanks, Kenneth and have a wonderful weekend! ~ gw

Tom Cunningham June 18, 2021 at 5:58 AM Victory is assured, battle footles. Tom Gershon Wolf June 18, 2021 at 10:04 AM And if the boots are too wide, then they're 'fattle bootles!' lol. Happy weekend, Tom!

Kim Rodrigues June 18, 2021 at 4:32 AM Wow! This feels like a march! I love this! Fave! (I was in the Navy, as you know) Kim Rodrigues June 18, 2021 at 6:08 PM I was never called a wave… lol. Segregated in Company. Gershon Wolf June 18, 2021 at 10:05 AM Thanks so much for the Fave, Kim... I had forgotten you were in the Navy, actually. Weren't the females segregated back then and called 'Waves?' ~ Just checking, gw

Line Gauthier June 18, 2021 at 3:07 AM I like this ~ definitely has a beat to it ~ Gershon Wolf June 18, 2021 at 10:06 AM You're right. It kind of marches. Too many syllables for a footle. Let's call it a 'tootle.' lol. Thanks, Line. :) gw