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Forward, My Feet

Forward My Feet Advance Retreat Forward My Feet The Foe To Greet Advance Retreat Forward My Feet Advance Retreat The Foe Deplete Forward My Feet Advance Retreat Forward My Feet The Foe Delete Mission Complete

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/18/2021 12:07:00 PM

Love the stoic bravery of this, it's all about putting one foot in front of the other (a lesson I have learned well over the past year and half!)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/18/2021 12:55:00 PM

That's the ticket, Michelle. We just gotta keep moving. :) gw

Kenneth Cheney

Date: 6/18/2021 11:48:00 AM

Always moving ahead. I so enjoyed this one. Great job Gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/18/2021 12:52:00 PM

As the Stooges used to say: 'Inch by inch; Step by step; Foot by Foot..' lol. Thanks, Kenneth and have a wonderful weekend! ~ gw

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/18/2021 5:58:00 AM

Victory is assured, battle footles. Tom

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/18/2021 10:04:00 AM

And if the boots are too wide, then they're 'fattle bootles!' lol. Happy weekend, Tom!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/18/2021 4:32:00 AM

Wow! This feels like a march! I love this! Fave! (I was in the Navy, as you know)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/18/2021 6:08:00 PM

I was never called a wave… lol. Segregated in Company.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/18/2021 10:05:00 AM

Thanks so much for the Fave, Kim... I had forgotten you were in the Navy, actually. Weren't the females segregated back then and called 'Waves?' ~ Just checking, gw

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/18/2021 3:07:00 AM

I like this ~ definitely has a beat to it ~

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/18/2021 10:06:00 AM

You're right. It kind of marches. Too many syllables for a footle. Let's call it a 'tootle.' lol. Thanks, Line. :) gw