Fortune's Wound

—The Privilege of Ruin— My friend, write not of grief because thy pen Can counterfeit the thunder of the slain; Nor gild thy page with borrowed wounds, when Thou hast not heard thy triumph fracture pain. What knowest thou of winter, if thy hearth Has never failed at midnight?—of the door That shuts upon the hand that gave it worth, The coinless dawn, the name that is no more? Thy loves have passed like comets through thy bed, Thy laurels climb where lesser spirits bow; Yet there are alphabets the crowned have read Only as maps of countries unknown now. For verse begins where fortune loses claim: The wound looks up—and learns thy tongue by name.
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Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 12:54 AM
Brilliant sonneteering, Mohit. Yes you understand not only sonnet meter but also some enjambment. Lots of poets don't seem to enjoy using enjambment but I find it almost necessary sometimes! Love this profound theme. 🕊️
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August 12, 2026 at 1:10 AM
Thank you, Andrea. ✨Your noticing the enjambment means a lot.🙏 Interestingly, *Fortune’s Wound* arrived after I read a poem by Muhammad Ali that, to me, felt lacking in soul.🤔 It made me ask: what happens when one writes of wounds never truly endured? The sonnet became my answer—a meditation on borrowed grief versus lived pain. 📖✍️ To brighter pages, Mohit Mitra
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